A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. Describe what stood out to you as important, what feedback surprised you the most, what feedback you think was outright wrong or silly.
I think that the feedback on explaining more slightly makes sense but it is just a short 1 minute pitch not a business plan pitch obviously ill go into more details.
What did you change, based on the feedback?
Hello Garrett!
ReplyDeleteInteresting idea, in a world searching for convince around every corner I believe your service would thrive! Just about everyone I know has had plenty of experience shipping packages and having to deal with the stress of delivery malfunctions. Putting everything in one place would make everything easier! For your next pitch try shortening your description of what you can send and maybe focus on the details of the app a bit more. Overall really great though! Here is my blog http://opportunistictimes.blogspot.com
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ReplyDeleteHello Garrett,
ReplyDeleteCustomer service is one of the hardest and one of the most important aspects for a company of any kind. Just a suggestion, have you ever thought about using this app for the airline industry? I can't tell you how many times I have dealt with the terrible customer service that American Airlines has. Just a suggestion. Overall great post and I think you have a great idea as well. Having a company invest in a third party customer service business sounds fantastic. Check out my blog: dylankojo.blogspot.com
I think your idea is great and would be very successful in today's society because everyone orders online anymore. As far as your elevator pitch goes it was good but I think it could be improved upon. If you adjusted your camera so that when you look into it, its at eye level then it wouldnt look like you are looking down the entire time. Also I think if you shortened it just a bit you would keep the people you are trying to reach more interested in your product. I truly believe that after 60 seconds people lose interest in things like product pitches. Here is a link to my blog:http://courtneydscott.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteHey Garrett! I really enjoyed your post and think you idea is very innovative. It would simplify everything if we could just have everything in one place. As for your pitch, it was a bit long and I think a great way to cut down on that would be to make the introduction quicker. This increases the speed of the whole pitch as well because you hit a better flow of your words if you can nail the introduction! If you have some time be sure to check out my blog! http://biglilcut.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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