SHIP HAPPENS!
My opportunity is slightly broad currently but it is the general lack of support for USPS and packages in business and consumer. My solution isn't necessarily staring a rival business but going to USPS or UPS or Fed Ex to improve almost like a consultant in more efficient services especially for B2B shipping through small packages not on trucks.
Hi Garrett!
ReplyDeleteFirstly, I thought your title, "Ship Happens!" was funny and intriguing for first time listeners of your service. It helps catch people's attention and keep them listening. The idea for this service sounds good and useful to many businesses. The only thing I would recommend for your next elevator pitch is to maybe not move around your hands as much, as it can sometimes be distracting. Besides that I think you did great and I really enjoyed watching. Here's the link to my blog, check it out when you get the chance:
http://ent3003nicole.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no1.html
I love the name of your business, it's very funny and catchy. I really like the idea of your business. I know I have been frustrated with USPS and Fedex. I think that you should also consider UPS, since they are most common mailer for business to business sales. I think that USPS definitely needs some help with their shipping since they have so many problems. Check out my post: http://rachelquispe.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-1.html
ReplyDeleteI like the name, don't really know what your going though or the market your appealing too so work on the clarity. Second its OK to put down other companies just have the information to back out any points you make against them, like the 15 min window is great just explain what it is. Personally I explained too much but you can lose people both ways. Check out my blog at http://mrdreaces.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-1.html
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